So, my half-breed group is going to go back to the inn to
get the rest of the girls out. [Yay!] The plan is rather complicated, especially
if you don’t know the story, so I am not even going to try to summarize it.
Basically, there are lots of people, each with a role to play. Of these people,
one girl is a decoy; one guy is a fake customer.
I was working on this part, where my main girl is telling that
guy what exactly he will have to do. What he does to get in is solid. But as I
was writing what he does to get the decoy girl out, I was like, “…Um, wouldn’t
it be much easier if he just killed the innkeeper?”
Well, duh.
Yet I am torn, because one of the big focal points for the
group is stealth. They want to get in and out without anyone seeing, knowing,
or even suspecting. Lives depend on it. The group is killing people downstairs,
yes --- but to kill the innkeeper, who is upstairs…that sort of undermines the
whole sneaking-in-and-out thing.
…BUT…at the same time, if they leave the innkeeper alive,
she will just capture new girls; the current girls will be free, but new girls
will soon take their places. …As long as the innkeeper is alive, the brothel
will stay open.
And that…cannot happen.
So something has to give.
And it has to be stealth.
So I guess it is not much of a dilemma, ha!
The group’s immediate goal is to rescue the current girls.
But the second aspect of their goal is shutting down the
inn, for good.
…So…the fake customer guy will go go downstairs, let the
group inn, help everyone get out, then go back upstairs and finish the job.
Then he and the decoy girl will go outside and meet the group at the meeting
place.
…At least, that is the plan.
It doesn’t exactly happen like that.
=) …and =’(
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